First Cut Feedback

When we showed out production to the rest of the class, the exporting had gone wrong so the sound was wrong, and some shots were missing, there is a part that goes slow motion when it shouldn't so we plan to correct that.

We was told that the news report seemed unprofessional so we are going to re-film the news report part. to improve it we shall have the actor wear a suit, and stand still and talk without smiling.

It was also suggested that we add a news bar to the bottom of the news reading part so that it seems like a more realistic news report.